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Kuu-Nara 
OMG I didn't think I would finish this today. =D I pushed myself into it. I guess JintheWolf helped me a lot. Wait... HE DID!! Him and I created this Short story for laughs. One day I said I wanted Pocky, so I got some, then I was thinking about the game I was like. Hey Jin, do you think Jin and Ash would do this? We had so much fun RPing it that I could not stop and not share! The story is down below if you want more detail. 
Thank you Snoogums!
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JintheWolf 
I enjoyed this project a lot cause it started out as a joke and look what happened. I knew what Pocky was but I've never heard of the game. Darn you Ash for peaking my curiosity. I hope you all enjoy this short. And maybe more shorts will come in the future from maybe the silliest things we both joke about. ^w^



SHORT ROLL PLAY
By:
JintheWolf & Kuu-Nara 

Lombax Shorties in

“The Dangers of Pocky”


(SRP - K)   (This is in the near future. I will post it when we get to the right time.)

Zuri looked at the shops around and gasped as she saw a bunch of foreign candy. She jumped right in like a little girl. “Sissy I WANT I WANT I WANT!” She said as she pointed to a box of Pocky. Ash rolled her eyes and said. “Sure. Its only 5 bolts” She went in and got some. She gave it to her little sister and said. “You better use it!” “OH I sure will.” She giggled with a sly laugh. Ash was not to happy about it but she let it slide. As she walked she saw many people in the town. They were at the Summer festival.


(SRP - J)

Jin was out and about at the Summer Festival, enjoying the sights and all the smells of food. His stomach growled as he pat it saying, “Jeez, I didn’t know I’d be this hungry. Should’ve went along with the….others.” He slowed down spotting a great sight. It was of Ash and what appeared to be her friend or little sister. He waved over at them shouting out in surprise, “Hey Ash. Didn’t think I’d see you here.”


(SRP - K)

Ash skipped a bit towards Jin. “Hey Jin-A-Roo!” She smiled a cute smile then looked over at her sister. “Jin, this is my little sister, She is here for a bit before I send her butt back to that planet.” Zuri heard what she said and didn't like it. “I’M Not going back.” She folded her arms and then thought of something. “Hey Ashy? Do you remember that promise you made me?” She then giggled a bit and shuffled her hands. “Umm, yea, I promised you anything as long as you helped me with that bad guy.” Ash narrowed her eyes a bit then listened to her sister. “Well, I see that Jin is a HOT looking blind lombax. I want you to play Pocky!” Ash gasped. “NO, I will NOT EVER play that game with anyone!” Ash raised her hands, a little disappointed in Zuri.





(SRP - J)

Tilting his head a little at both the compliment (he thinks) and this strange thing called Pocky, Jin ventured to ask. “What’s that? Some form of Lombax-Nip?” He had never had the stuff in his life and it peaked his curiosity as he scratched behind his head smirking too.


(SRP - K)

Zuri popped right in front of him and said. “It’s not Lombax-Nip, It's a form of couples game, doesn't matter what age or gender.” She giggled. “You take this stick here. Each one of you take one end and who every gets the last bite wins!” She giggled once again. Ash growled a bit. “It's kissing that's what it is….” She crossed her arms and looked away.


(SRP - J)

Jin grabbed his chin and thought what the hey, it’s only a harmless game. Right? “Well it can’t be all that bad. I’ll just try to eat it faster than her. Unless she’s too scared to try.” He said folding his arms now getting cocky. Though in his mind he was thinking about backing out less he embarrassed himself.


(SRP - K)

Zuri then spoke out like a little cat. “YAY!!!!” She handed Jin one pocky stick, “Now you place your mouth on one end, she places hers on the other.” She backed away for a few. “I’m Not doing this Zuri!” She still had her arms crossed however Looking at jin.


(SRP - J)

Jin hesitated at first but leaned over and took the stick of Pocky with his teeth. He tasted the sweetness of the chocolate and knew darn well it was made from the milk of those space cows. “Mmm, this is tasty.” He said with a smile as he looked over to Ash. He nodded his head over at her, showing he was game.


(SRP - K)

Ash blushed bright red. Then looked over at Zuri. “Promise me this is part of the deal?” Zuri Nodded and said, “YES! You don’t have to worry” Ash then mumbled under her breath. “Now I am worried.” Sighing under her breath she shook off the fear and looked at Jin. In her head she was like. (OMG how could I let myself be this stupid!) She took one step to Jin and took a bite on the other stick. Ready to bite away.


(SRP - J)

The moment was still as Jin readied to munch away the Pocky stick. Being this close to Ash made him a little nervous and he thought maybe this wasn’t such a good idea. Then his stomach growled again and that was the last straw. He began eating his end but rather slowly. ‘Oh man, I hope I don’t look like an idiot’ he thought as he tried to stare over anywhere else and then back at Ash a couple of times. ‘She’s kinda cute when I’m up close like this when she isn’t trying to bite my tail off. GAH stop thinking like that you fuzzhead!’ His thoughts were tormenting him.


(SRP - K)

Ash was blushing deep red and her mind was going crazy ‘Does he want to friken kiss me. UGH! EW.’ She closed her eyes for a second as she took a few bits. But reopened them to see how close she was. From the first bite she felt she was too close. She took tiny but quick bites. And every second her heart raced faster.


(SRP - J)

Almost there. Just a few more good bites and hopefully I can bite the middle before we...’ His thoughts trailed off. He was now at the middle along with her. The tension was real and it was now or never. Expecting the expected. There was just one thing though. “THERE YOU ARE JIN!!” A loud shout was heard and a strong slap on the back knocked Jin over and low and behold, it just kinda happened. Everything just sort of slowed down in his mind all thanks to Havoc’s overbearing strength.


(SRP - K)

Ash Closed her eyes as she took a few bites but then she heard Jin’s name and could not stop but to open her eyes again. But all of a sudden, her heart stopped as his lips touched hers. Inside she was squealing like a little girl. She held that pose for a second before letting out a loud screech! “I KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN!” She stared at Jin as she Froze. However once the kiss ended her heart kinda fluttered. She was pleased, secretly she liked this half blind Lombax.


(SRP - J)

Jin would be lying if he didn’t think he heard alarms in his head cause he did. They kissed. Jin Maurice Varrius has kissed a girl. Accidental mind you but still. He waited for her to push him away quickly but, it didn’t happen as fast as he thought. To be honest, he kinda liked it too but broke away as soon as he felt her pulling away. His ears lowered from the expected screeching. Though that wasn’t on his mind. ‘Omg. These lips of mine are lethal weapons.’ He laughed nervously and apologized a million times over. “Um I’m so sorry Ash! *laughs* it’s just a game. My bad! *laughs*” He was blushing but trying to laugh it off. Turning around, he had a glazed look in his eyes. ‘I’d count that as one of the best things to happen to me, next to...well I’ve never won the lottery so meh.’ He thought. She was quite the girl.


(SRP - K)

Ash heard Jin spoke, trying to apologize to her a ton of times. Blushing and looking down with one finger on her lip, she said, “It’s no problem. I um..” She looked at him. “It’s just a kids game.” She smiled, however behind her was Zuri who was squealing like a girl. “You Like him, you like you, You, you You like him!” Then as she walked away to look around she pounced a bit singing, “Jin and Ash sitten on a star, K.I.S.S.I.N.G.” Giggles, “First comes this, then comes love, then there is a Nephew in the kitty carriage.” Ash heard what Zuri said and slowly turned her head to the annoying little kit. “I swear she is trying to make me look bad.” She shrugged then looked at Jin. “Just a friendly Kiss nothing else.” She then followed her sister. “See ya guys.”


(SRP - J)

Jin waved them off as he face-palmed. He heard tapping and looked over at Havoc. “What’re you doing?” He asked hesitantly. “Tweeting the fellows about your twittering with that sweet number.” Havoc laughed but was shocked when his PDA was taken, slammed on the ground, and stepped on. “You are not to speak a word of this to the others.” Jin said as he walked off with that passive aggressive smile. He’d get his friend a new one later as they continued checking out the Summer Festivals. As they walked, one thing ran through Jin’s mind ‘Pocky is a very dangerous thing. Tasty yet dangerous.’


THE END




Characters

Kuu-Nara
Name: Ash Inai Kuna
Nicknames: FireBall
Age: 23 August 5th 2977
Species: Domestic Medium Hair Lombax
Gender: Female
Character Created: November 30th 2003

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JintheWolf 
Name: Jin Maurice Varrius
Nicknames: Lombaxian Ninja, Werebax, Li’l Leader, Roguebax
Age: 25 (Born March 14th 2974)
Species: Long Coated Lombax (Rare)
Gender: Male
Character Created: January 18, 2011

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Kuu-Nara 
Name: Zuri Kuna
Nicknames: Trouble, Stop, Hey you, Punk, Brat, Demon in discise
Age: 12 (Born N/A)
Species: Short Hair Domestiaced Lombax
Gender: Female
Character Created: 5-23-2016

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JintheWolf 
Name: 
Havoc McBriggs
Nicknames: Bruiser, Big Guy
Age: 27 (Born N/A)
Species: Short-haired Lombax
Gender: Male
Character Created: 
January 18, 2011





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<3 omg this was the adorible!! so true!!!